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note on rank: In the Royal Navy all capital ships have a commanding officer with the rank of
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Roberts said, it's
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The confusion, of course, is between the position captain ("the old man") and the rank captain. Right now, with the help of the wikilink, the text says his rank was
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I understand Guy D'Oyly-Hughes was the ship's captain. Do you know his rank at the time? Given that the air captain was a CDR, it seems likely he was a
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I wonder if draught is "maximum draught" or equiv. "deep draught"? If the reference doesn't specify, I'll strike this comment.
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My pleasure — it's almost there. When the coffee reaches the brain, I'll take another look at the external links. Cheers.
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I've recently started using {{Reflist|colwidth=30em}}, it's worth a look, but just a suggestion.
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Thanks for the review, there are plenty more if you feel up to it! :-)
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