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Cressman article, rather it is inferred from it in that he doesn't list any later attacks. It's perhaps not unreasonable to make the inference, but I think it would count as OR. Unless there is a source that explicitly states Tiptoe made the final attack, I don't think we can include that statement here.
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The VA/JB information is in uboat.net on inspection, but without any clarification. It may well be the engine issue as you say. If so that can be re-added to the article if it can be cited, otherwise it is enough to simply state VA was the builder. The rest of the edits address most of my concerns,
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