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South Slav state, the Kingdom of Serbs, Croats and Slovenes – which was renamed Yugoslavia in 1929. She was captured by the Italians during the Axis invasion of Yugoslavia in April 1941, and despite her age the Italians put her to good use on coastal and second-line escort duties in the Adriatic. When the Italians capitulated in September 1943, her crew tried to reach an Allied port, but scuttled her when this proved impossible. This article is part of the 36-article Featured topic,
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The answer to this is with reference to the captions of photographs of RN ships in the same book, which have exactly the same annotation, "Photo, Official", whereas French ships for example, have "French Navy, Official" (see page 139 for an example of the latter). I consider it is entirely reasonable
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In such circumstances, there would be a need for a torpedo boat that could sail from the Austro-Hungarian Navy (German: kaiserliche und königliche Kriegsmarine, Hungarian: Császári és Királyi Haditengerészet) base at the Bocche di Cattaro (the Bocche or Bay of Kotor) to the strait during the night,
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I don't think it is necessary to cite the fact that T3 was a T-group boat as it is very unlikely to be challenged. I could add it and a citation to the caption if you think it is necessary, but it seems like overkill to me. An explanation of the distinction is made per "The F-group had two funnels
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was a dinky little steam-driven torpedo boat that started life as an Austro-Hungarian vessel. She saw extensive service in the Adriatic Sea in the latter stages of WWI, performing convoy, escort, patrol and minesweeping tasks, and anti-submarine operations. After WWI she was taken over by the new
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As an aside, would you be ok with adding DOIs for the books? These enable easier access than ISBNs and I faintly recall that there is an MOS on providing as many access options as possible. If you do wish to, then Djukanović 2023 and Ramet 2006 do have DOIs
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In response, Kern ordered T6 to escort Perun to the Bay of Kotor, and the two vessels arrived there the next day without incident, where T6's malfunctioning gun was repaired and she was loaded with weapons, supplies and extra men and sent to
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In response, Kern ordered T6 to escort Perun to the Bay of Kotor; the two vessels arrived there the next day without incident. There, T6's malfunctioning gun was repaired; she was loaded with weapons, supplies and extra men and sent to
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was of the T type instead of the F type. The same source this image is from does include a photo of one of the two-funnel models of these torpedo boats, but it's of much lower quality so I can understand why it is not used.
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to assume that because it does not say "Yugoslav Navy, Official", but uses the same annotation as RN vessels, that it was taken by a RN source (probably the naval attache, or by a RN ship on a show the flag visit).
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Remove comma after 25 November to be consistent with this article's non-use of serial comma. (There is one serial comma later that is fine because of the complexity of the phrase)
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Restructure so "1 November 93" is not stuck together and could be mistaken for a date. Splitting the description of the SSCS into its own sentence ("This was...") will help.
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The original concept of operation for the 250t-class boats was that they would sail in a flotilla at the rear of a cruising battle formation, and were to intervene
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just credits the image to "Photo, Official" - could you please explain where the indication is that this is a British official photo, rather than a Yugoslav one?
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As the end of the war approached in November and the Austro-Hungarian Empire broke apart, on 1 November 93 was ceded to the State of Slovenes, Croats and Serbs
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In the WWI subsection, "the naval historian Zvonimir Freivogel" is too long, just "Freivogel" may bw enough since he was introduced just two paragraphs ago.
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Remove comma before "and" (CinS). Think of it this way. Is the part after the conjunction a standalone sentence conceivably? Not "Escorted 36 convoys.".
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as diesels with the necessary power were not available, and the Austro-Hungarian Navy did not have the practical experience to run turbo-electric boats
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I will also note that the caption doesn't quite work right now - it's technically unsourced since the distinction is never made in this article that
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As of 1 October 2024, 01:44 (UTC), this page is active and open for discussion. An FAC coordinator will be responsible for closing the nomination.
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Solid article. Paragraphs and sentences occasionally need splitting, and I have some thoughts on commas. Ping me when all of this is handled.
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How exactly did the ship make a good impression in Malta? Was it the sailors' conduct, the ship's power or something else?
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she was armed with two 66 mm (2.6 in) guns and four 450 mm (17.7 in) torpedo tubes, and could carry 10–12 naval mines
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Skradin where the population begged them to leave the harbour to avoid the town being bombed by the Italians.
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On 29 September, 93 along with 82, 87 and 96 plus the Ersatz Triglav-class destroyers Lika, Dukla and Uzsok,
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On 29 September, 93 along with 82, 87 and 96, and the Ersatz Triglav-class destroyers Lika, Dukla and Uzsok
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Why have we not linked to the Skoda 7 cm gun article in the lead when we have linked to it in the infobox?
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Consider converting the translation note to a footnote to improve readability in this complex sentence.
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The 250t-class F-group boats had short raised forecastles and an open bridge, and were fast and agile
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Comma after "29 October" for consistency with the other date prepositional clauses in this paragraph
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93 F was laid down on 9 January 1915, launched on 25 November, and commissioned on 4 April 1916
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I'd recommend splitting the first paragraph unless it is like this in other articles of the FT.
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In June, 93, along with 96 as well as CsikĂłs and her sister ships Wildfang and Velebit, were
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T6's commander, a Slovene, was not interested in serving in a Croatian navy, and abandoned
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with one pair mounted between the forecastle and bridge, and the other aft of the mainmast
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On 20 August, 93 was transferred to the Bocche, and was part of the 1st Torpedo Flotilla
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Link to Zablaće (Šabac) or Zablaće (Čačak), whichever one the source is referring to?
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In June, 93, along with 96, and CsikĂłs and her sister ships Wildfang and Velebit were
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with the forward gun mounted on the forecastle, and the aft gun on the quarterdeck
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rather than the single funnel of the T-group" under Description and construction.
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During 1917, 93 conducted further minesweeping missions, and escorted 36 convoys.
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the Axis puppet fascist state, the Independent State of Croatia (NDH)
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locate and attack blockading ships and return to port before morning.
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the Independent State of Croatia (NDH), an Axis puppet fascist state
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In the biblio, link to Norman Friedman and Velimir Terzić?
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That's all from me, will do a source review soon. Cheers
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