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There seems to be some discrepancy regarding the dates. After talking about
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I don't agree with this assessment. You claim that writing style is substituted for facts. For example, let's consider the sentence you quoted, and the parts of it you removed. The temperature around 30 degrees - it's a fact. No rain had fallen - it's a fact. The sky cloudless, the air filled with
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I noticed that, too. September 1824 - Charles becomes king; 8 months later - new laws; April (which year) - unpopular; July 1830 - revolution. I looked at
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Based on the comments above, I wonder if I should have looked more closely at the language... I hope these issues have been resolved. Meanwhile, the article also lacks references and a military conflict infobox. If applicable, sections for See Also and/or
External Links might be nice too. Though I
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dust - facts. I don't see why it contradicts
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