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I have to admitt, I have been a bitt OCD with the images for the Sydney beaches section. I have currently reduced the amount of text for each beach and added an intro section that I retreived from another article, when I get a chance I will reformat the entire section with less images, maybe the best
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I don't think anyone is complaining about that article and it continues to grow, becuase unlike the tourism is Sydney article, tourism in India has lots of contributors. When I come up with more ideas I will keep adding to this article appropriatly, even if it has to double in size, I am putting this
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I think having seperate sections for Bondi, Manly and
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When I get a chance I will reduce the amount of text for each beach, maybe dedicate a few senteces for each one, mainly Bondi, Manly, Coogee, Bronte, Cronulla and Palm Beach. Or I could simply have a see also list instead. But I would like to keep the images. It might be a good idea to mention the
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Please do no take my comments as any sort of criticism of your fantastic work. However such a large amount of text will inevitably be noticed and deleted by other editors. Also, pictures tend to make the size of the page larger than text, and having several pictures for each beach is I think
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Parramatta section is more a cheerleader for the area rather than outlining anything significant for tourists. So it has a business centre, a mall, a rugby league team and a soccer team - how is this more significant than other suburbs of Sydney? We are certainly not talking loads of
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I don't actually mean it that way, its more like info for oversees visitors and for people who may want to see something thats kind off the beaten track, you know something different. i also think its worth a mention.
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No, it looks OK. The section describes what is on offer, not that it is a 'must see' or an 'amazing experience' or anything like that. Description of the process isnt necessarily advertising.
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