164:: What little there is seems informative, but the article has too many short single paragraph sections in fact the whole page is too short, the school must have more to offer than this if it is notable, because quite frankly it doesn't sound a very interesting place, are any of it alumni notable, even infamous will do. The page reads like one of those brief synopsis of local schools written in a bland anonymous town guide - where each section has to be confined to a limited number of words.
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Haileybury college is the best school in the world. Best results,best teachers,best school grounds, best education.They have raised some of the most successful in
Australia and should be commended on all they do for students-turning them into the highest of high achievers. This article certainly does
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as this is an excellent article. Haileybury
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Is is a good article, however not a great one. It is certainly better than most on wikipedia however it is not worthy of being a feature article. I certainly agree with adding some well known alumni as i know
Haileybury certainly does have some well known ones eg. Police Minister Tim Holding etc.
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