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42: 174:"which ended at age 26 because of arm and shoulder injuries" and "he retired from baseball at age 26." ending the first and second para, somewhat repetitive. 80: 70: 47: 52: 156: 230:
After saying "earned run average" put (ERA) so when you then use the abbreviation on its own, it'll be clear what it means.
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Suddenly, you reference a couple of sentences at the end of the lead but none of the rest of it. Why?
267: 146: 8: 211:"some of whom billed Clyde as the "next Sandy Koufax"" some? Or just one in particular? 103: 134: 26: 115: 17: 258:
Category for Sacramento Solos, I don't read anything about that in the article.
191: 184: 197:"18-0" should be 18–0, but what does that mean to a non-expert like me, I'm 281: 92: 201:
it means he played in 18 games and the team won all of the them?
224:"a rusty beginning" a little colloquial for an encyclopedia. 242:"sensation," refs after punctuation, quotes in quote marks. 245:"due in part because of" due to, not due because of. 280:I think I got everything. Thanks for the review. 262:A few items to address so I'll put the item 227:If you link strike out, I'd link home run. 239:"18-33 win-loss" 18–33 win–loss record. 14: 177:"Oddly enough, ..." not encyclopedic. 23: 24: 295: 214:Eastern League is a dab link too. 233:" with 3-9 record" a 3–9 record. 13: 1: 248:"the New York Times" that's 7: 10: 300: 285:19:03, 6 August 2013 (UTC) 276:13:28, 5 August 2013 (UTC) 255:" ex teammate" ex-teammate 217:Hall of Famer - which HoF? 161:10:48, 5 August 2013 (UTC) 236:Check the other records. 208:should be italicised. 171:Per WP:YEAR, 1973–75. 183:Texas Rangers is a 250:The New York Times 206:Sports Illustrated 204:Publications like 221:over 35,000 fans. 89: 88: 291: 268:The Rambling Man 220:"35,000+" -: --> 147:The Rambling Man 139: 130: 111: 43:Copyvio detector 31: 30: 18:Talk:David Clyde 299: 298: 294: 293: 292: 290: 289: 288: 120: 97: 91: 85: 57: 29: 22: 21: 20: 12: 11: 5: 297: 260: 259: 256: 253: 246: 243: 240: 237: 234: 231: 228: 225: 222: 218: 215: 212: 209: 202: 195: 188: 181: 178: 175: 172: 140: 87: 86: 84: 83: 78: 73: 67: 64: 63: 59: 58: 56: 55: 53:External links 50: 45: 39: 36: 35: 28: 25: 15: 9: 6: 4: 3: 2: 296: 287: 286: 283: 278: 277: 273: 269: 266:for a week. 265: 257: 254: 251: 247: 244: 241: 238: 235: 232: 229: 226: 223: 219: 216: 213: 210: 207: 203: 200: 196: 193: 192:perfectionist 189: 186: 182: 179: 176: 173: 170: 169: 168: 167: 163: 162: 158: 155: 152: 148: 145: 141: 138: 137: 133: 128: 124: 119: 118: 114: 109: 105: 101: 96: 95: 82: 79: 77: 74: 72: 69: 68: 66: 65: 61: 60: 54: 51: 49: 46: 44: 41: 40: 38: 37: 33: 32: 19: 279: 263: 261: 249: 205: 198: 165: 164: 153: 143: 142: 135: 131: 117:Article talk 116: 112: 93: 90: 81:Instructions 104:visual edit 48:Authorship 34:GA toolbox 144:Reviewer: 71:Templates 62:Reviewing 27:GA Review 199:guessing 166:Comments 157:contribs 76:Criteria 264:on hold 127:history 108:history 94:Article 282:Secret 190:So is 185:WP:DAB 187:link. 136:Watch 16:< 272:talk 151:talk 123:edit 100:edit 274:) 159:) 125:| 106:| 102:| 270:( 252:. 194:. 154:· 149:( 132:· 129:) 121:( 113:· 110:) 98:(

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